this fragile heart

~SnowAngel~

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http://tinysnowangel.blogspot.com/2012/10/this-fragile-heart.html

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there are pieces of my heart,
like glass that has fallen apart

Tears of mine held back and hushed
deep words that made me crushed

is it wrong to be full of love?
free and pure like a dove?

Silenced by fear, lonely as the moon
I have become a prisoner of my room

hours pass by, few care to say hi
with a life like this, would I rather die?

with all of my heart that is left, I will say this
there is enough life in me to give a kiss

passionately wailing, am I without?
loneliness has failed me, I won't doubt

the song in my heart is still singing
giving up is very tempting..

my heart will one day be restored
until then, I'll share this love forever
 
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may I make some suggestions? they're minor and might help give your poem a smoother flow. :goodtea:
 
Hmm always a flower in the back? xD

I should look at the writing thread somewhat closer @_@
 
The main background to my blog is a flower~ but it really does add to everything :P
I would have music if I knew how :/ most of what I could possibly add is stuff that I really don't want x-x

My poetry is not open for suggestions, sorry x-x
These are mostly things about me that I go through~
I might write about something if given the idea though.
 

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