[Discussions] SOTM#47 - December 2016

[Dark Angel]

 

[nanashi1]

Okay, I'm ready, though I'll be probably sometime in weekend (but it can also delay with few days) done with...

Edit: /me specualtes again with Isuzu-chan to go...xD

 

[Dark Angel]

Poll Is Now Re-Opened Until 8th Of December! Please VOTE NOW!

Thank you.

[MENTION=29193]nanashi1[/MENTION];
[MENTION=76810]Capt Jam[/MENTION];
[MENTION=25364]Decalcomania[/MENTION];
[MENTION=86576]Shakoran[/MENTION];



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[nanashi1]

Okay, did get it...

 

[Shakoran]

Let's see how this one will happens. I still hesitate between 2 thing in my thing >_<

 

[Dark Angel]

[MENTION=86576]Shakoran[/MENTION]; your entry looks very nice and cute as well. Good Work!

 

[nanashi1]

From my side as well, I can quiet say: that you did a great job made with, Ark... - Further so!

 

[Shakoran]

[MENTION=86576]Shakoran[/MENTION]; your entry looks very nice and cute as well. Good Work!

Thanks Tho i still hesitating between my other one, my signature will probably be changed later depend if i can make the other one better

From my side as well, I can quiet say: that you did a great job made with, Ark... - Further so!

As always !

 

[nanashi1]

As always !

Lol... Anyway (edit: hi!), you could it quiet the other in the Discussion area show us, if you it wanna...

 

[Shakoran]

Lol... Anyway (edit: hi!), you could it quiet the other in the Discussion area show us, if you it wanna...

Heh ? Really ?

 

[nanashi1]

Heh ? Really ?

Yeah, because you could probably then some interesting feedbacks get, where then you may deciding the other take for this event...

 

[Shakoran]

Yeah, because you could probably then some interesting feedbacks get, where then you may deciding the other take for this event...

I don't actually know how to do that xD

 

[nanashi1]

I don't actually know how to do that xD

Lol, don't play now the newbie...xD You post simply your other siggy here, and then you get not just from me feedbacks about it, but also from the others. If the feedback decides the other to take, then you edit in the Entry section, but if the feedback says that the current one enough is for, then you let it...

 

[Shakoran]

Lol, don't play now the newbie...xD You post simply your other siggy here, and then you get not just from me feedbacks about it, but also from the others. If the feedback decides the other to take, then you edit in the Entry section, but if the feedback says that the current one enough is for, then you let it...

Alright Alright xD I go and put my other one here then

 

[nanashi1]

Alright Alright xD I go and put my other one here then

Okay, but if you really for it feeling, you'll be not forced for (though, my interest forces me for...xD)...

 

[Shakoran]

Here is the second one i was hesitating :

 

[nanashi1]

Here is the second one i was hesitating :

Lol, I don't think so (just after my opinion), the render harmonizes with the BG pretty - It gives the X-mas feeling very well...~ Where then, well done...

 

[Shakoran]

Lol, I don't think so (just after my opinion), the render harmonizes with the BG pretty - It gives the X-mas feeling very well...~ Where then, well done...

Yeah but actually i prefere my Entry more because of the renders xD

 

[nanashi1]

Yeah but actually i prefere my Entry more because of the renders xD

Okay, just let's wait for some feedbacks, okay? But it's your decision...

 

[Shakoran]

Okay, just let's wait for some feedbacks, okay?

Yeah.

 

[nanashi1]

Yeah.

Then is it decided...

 

[|♚|KK|♚|]

[MENTION=86576]Shakoran[/MENTION]; I like your entry, good choice with deciding ^^

 

[Shakoran]

[MENTION=44312]Dark Angel[/MENTION] now that i think... does i need to put '' Anime-sharing.com '' in my entry ?

 

[Ignis]

Here is the second one i was hesitating :

I think your current entry is a better for a few reasons.

First, the background. Your current entry has a nice mix of nicely placed snowflakes and very, very nice colour undertones. Your other signature has, as its background, a scenery of a Christmas celebration at a town centre. It's more crowded, and unlike stacks of snowflakes with a nice gradient and transition, rows of houses don't really blend nicely with (or into) the foreign object (the girl) above them.

Second, the focus. The aforementioned background image of your second version, by its very nature of depicting a crowd gathering around an object, draws attention to itself. It competes with what should instead be the focus of the signature, the cleav― the girl wearing a Santa outfit. The snowflakey background in your current entry arguably gives more space for the main focus to stand out.

Placement here also matters: while focal points don't always need to be located at the centre of the signature, the girl in your current entry stands in the midst of effects―I'm not sure whether the white bokeh effects add more flavour more than they're disruptive, by the way―and two bodies of text. Meanwhile, the text in your other signature is sparsely placed. You could perhaps make the argument that it makes for a better postcard; a signature, however, I don't think so.

Third, the text. Yes, the text in both signatures uses the same typeface and effects, but where it's located matters arguably more. Your current entry? A mix of bluish and whitish gradients. Fine. Your other signature? A considerably more crowded scenery. That doesn't mean the text doesn't blend in well in the latter, but I'd argue that it creates more distractions than necessary.

Full disclaimer: my bullshitting critiquing proficiency doesn't mirror my designing proficiency. ;)

 

[Dark Angel]

[MENTION=44312]Dark Angel[/MENTION] now that i think... does i need to put '' Anime-sharing.com '' in my entry ?

Indeed. It's missing but still it's a very nice looking entry!