Tralalalala~

Also this conversation should probably be moved somewhere else before the thread gets moved into the spam section
 
Hmm... for something goofy as one piece, the hand drawn lines are fine. How they arent perfectly straight adds to the piece, might even work to exaggerate. The two skulls in the first slash of the "ru" seem a bit copy paste so maybe turning one of them so it looks to be at a different angle would be nice. Same for the two center devil fruits in the "i". This might just be personal pickiness but the meat sitting on the "fu" should be tilted so it isnt parallel to the line.

/me pokes [MENTION=62675]Vivi[/MENTION];
 
Hmm... for something goofy as one piece, the hand drawn lines are fine. How they arent perfectly straight adds to the piece, might even work to exaggerate. The two skulls in the first slash of the "ru" seem a bit copy paste so maybe turning one of them so it looks to be at a different angle would be nice. Same for the two center devil fruits in the "i". This might just be personal pickiness but the meat sitting on the "fu" should be tilted so it isnt parallel to the line.

/me pokes [MENTION=62675]Vivi[/MENTION];

Oh, well, I'm not very confident in my characters as of yet, so I didn't want to do anything that would make it look like a different character xD but the meat thing, that is just a coincidence about the parallel thing o 3 o
 
Well, I agree with Pichu... - This thread should the artist-topic in middle field stay, and not too much random chit~chat, because this thread wasn't for that made, not>_>?
 
Just test them with quick sketches and whatnot~ Make it larger after you find one that you like~
 

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Glaymez wrote on Shine's profile.
Will you upload this game by any chance? That would be amazing

https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01198627.html - 犯られたままじゃおわれないっ!!
Mistersmiles wrote on ramori's profile.
Hi Ramori,

Could you please upload this? https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01197309.html

The draught seems to be over, and interesting games are coming out one after another.

Thanks a ton!
In the trenches desperate to play Shiro to Kuro no Alice
awsater wrote on Otokonoko's profile.
Could you update RJ01114470 please? It's in 12 parts, but parts 7 and 9 are missing. There are no problems with the rest.