Hey hey, I think that remake is even sexier than the original! You changed A LOT; most notable, the peeing & the neck-bite. (I don't miss the pissing, honestly, heh heh) But, obviously, that whole sequence is completely different, either way. All the breast-play/groping... Right up my alley!
Naturally, since you've perfected your use of post-processing (and the res-jump), the quality is also much higher! You've got a couple grammatical errors, though, so I got your back!
Panel 2 - "Such hassle!" ; should be, "Such a hassle!"
Panel 3 - "It's not the first time she does this" ; should be, "It's not the first time she's done this"
So, are you planning on doing more of these? Seems like... such a hassle, lol, but I'd totally understand if you did.
Super-sexy work!