I no longer have problem with Netorase as long as it's well done. And now that you are bringing the subject up I might say something about how ANIM handled it. I thought something was off when I played it but couldn't put my finger on it (I mean something off besides what I already stated in my other posts about the game). Now, after reading your comment about the dialogue, I think I know what was it: The internal monologue of the MC in the sex scenes.
I could be wrong, since it's being some time since I played it, but I remember that in
Tsuma ga Kirei ni Natta Wake the MC was really descriptive about his feelings, showing what he felt with every action and reaction from his wife and the envy he felt when she did it. I think that was really HOT!!! Also the MC really degraded himself comparing with the Netori guy, being fully aware of his own worthlessness, while at the same time being very excited by that same wothlessness. I think, that was really good.
On the contrary, I felt that the internal monologue of MC from ANIM's last game wasn't descriptive enough. I felt that he was just repeating the same tantra during the whole game: "YOSHINO!!! Ohhhh I feel so jelous, but this is so hot!!! (fap, fap, fap)..." He used different words but all was the same repeating loop. You can't convey jeloussy by repeating "I'm jealous!!!" over and over again, you have to be more descriptive than that.
His attitude during the sex scenes felt a little off too, like I could imaginine him fapping with a big happy face, like it was someone's else wife. I think the hotness in Netorase comes from the contrast between the excitement of the husband and his mortyfing feelings for what he is watching, so the husband should be fapping like crazy with a face full of tears, not with a big happy smile. That's the right attitude for an MC in a Netorase game IMHO.
Do you know by chance how many scenes were added?
EDIT: I wanted to say this for a while but I think Orcsoft is becoming more and more vainilla.
