Story:
(Side note, i'm skipping all the character building moments (dates, conversations, etc) throughout the story)
The MC met his wife seven years prior on a train. Two years after they married. Their 5 year anniversary is coming up. They're beginning to talk about having children due to parental pressure from both sides. The MC's wife doesn't seem to want to have them right now, but she does want them "next year". She'd rather make money and work some more.
Their marriage has been great. For knowing each other for seven years, they haven't felt tired of each other at all, which can be a problem around the 5-9 year mark for many marriages. The MC on the other hand, isn't exactly feeling the same way, though doesn't admit to it. He's been having delusions of his wife having sex with other men, due to an experience earlier in their relationship where the MC stopped/saved his wife who was very drunk from cheating.
These delusions build up, and after a quick discussion about maybe spicing up their sexual life, he tries the bring it up but backs out. She enquires again the following day, and he finally comes forward. She admits she's thought about it (she's human after all), but I don't think she realises that the MC means more than just thinking about it. He clears that up, and she feels a bit confounded about it all. But here's the thing, she never is up in arms about it like she is about another thing later on.
During their discussion though, the MC admits he's into the deep end of it. He wants her on attack and defence, and more importantly, to act like she's lovers with another man, telling another man she loves them and all. This plot device, i feel, makes the game stand out and kind of saves it from being mediocre at best.
The wife says she's got a business trip coming up.
Some time later, the MC shows her a blog another cuckolded man is writing, and after more conversing, she finally agrees, after seeing her husband go as far as to embarrassingly ejaculate in his pants. Damn son.
She sets a condition. She gets to choose who. The MC is fine with that. She also says she's too embarrassed for her husband to be there watching, nor does she want it filmed. The MC isn't entirely happy, but settles for a report style.
Her candidate is a new person at their company. After several days, she is unable to tell the junior their plan. "Would you have sex with me!" Yeah... not going to work. They arrange to meet, the three of them, for coffee, where the MC tells the antagonist.
The antagonist is really surprised and taken back. Starts questioning them about the severity of the situation. Do they love each other, is he forcing her, etc. Ultimately says he'll think about it, and after a few days, he tells his wife while at works that he'll do it.
The best opportunity is coming right up, during their business trip together. But... its also over their anniversary. Ultimately, both the MC and wife agree that it'll be fine.
Trip starts, she promises not to drink too much (but totally does), and the cuckolding begins.
Here's the thing, there's a few business trips during this story, all of which except the last are two nights. They only ever cover the first night. Maybe the heroine remains faithful and i'm complaining about nothing. I wish they were more clear.
When she returns, she acts completely normal. You know, sometimes these wives begin to stutter a little, shocked about what just happened, but she seems completely fine. That night the first report begins, and it's pretty great. She gets really into the teasing, and teases the MC a lot during all of these reports.
You know, i sometimes complain about going too fast, with the heroine falling too quick, but maybe that doesn't have to always be a bad thing. Consider yourself for a moment. You're into it, so why can't she be too? Right from the beginning. People get turned on by fetishes, especially the taboo. Look at porn hub, half the shit there has incest titles. Why? Because if you're not adjusted and desensitised to it yet, it'll make you nut harder because of the immorality of the situation. Sometimes i'm quick to forget women get turned on too, well, maybe not forget that specifically, but rather I forget that woman can get turned on by immorality too. Sex can be better if someones really worked up about something, think of something less taboo, like BDSM.
She also teasingly whispers in his ear, though admits its a joke later, that "I want to try this again". You know, it really got me thinking... Why the hell isn't there bi neural audio for VN's yet? Imagine how intense scenes like that would suddenly get if it sounded like you were being whispered at in your ear? During the other reports there's similar sinister whispers. God damn I wish there was bi-neural audio.
Anyway, MC says he doesn't want to do it again. Despite this she whispers during the report as a tease: "Even if I cheated again, you wouldn't get angry right?" HHHHHnnnnNNNNNgggggg PLEASE ASMR PLEASE OH PLEASE.
After the report, she winds things down and ensures her husband that she shouldn't have taken what she said seriously. Ultimately, they say they both feel closer now.
Time passes, another business trip. Later, MC is back on board after being teased again during sex and he wants her to do it again during the next business trip. She's a little stern this time, and asks if he's sure, but that sternness quickly turns into acceptance, and then she whispers (PLEASE ASMR), "Is it alright if i have sex with him until the morning", sounding as alluring as ever.
There's another coffee meet between the three. The antagonist is back on board, says he's glad he was asked because the cheating sex was fun for him too.
This time, MC forgets to give his wife condoms. This is where I really need to play through the heroines route properly. There's no depiction of them, and there's sound of him cumming inside her, yet there's no leakage, even though there is two scenes where there is internal leakage.
There's some great stuff here. MC remembers he forgot the condoms after it's too late and can't get a hold of her again.
Second report: Admits to drinking semen, despite never doing it before (OUCH). The teasing ramps up a whole lot too, often referring to the antagonist as the man she loves. REMEMBER: MC asked for real lovey-dovey shit at the beginning. She's just doing what he wanted. Her teasing gets a little mean, but good. MC doesn't last for more than an hour like the antagonist does.
Another tip! Round three! Ding ding!
This time he wants to see it. She's really against it, like up in arms a bit. Interesting, because she was never against the affair like this. Ultimately, she accepts, and as the USB comes in, she writes a note saying she's too embarrassed to face her husband after he watches it and for him not to talk to her until tomorrow. The scene shows her being a lot more into it than she ever has been with her husband, but she's really tying hard to hold back. In fact, they go into the shower between the two recorded scenes and she doesn't realise the antagonist intentionally leaves the recording on during this bit. You can hear the two passionately kissing in the shower.
Two more trips! Ones coming right up, another is overseas for a month.
This time he wants to see it, in person. Again, she's up in arms, but comes around to it. He isn't allowed to watch the beginning though. He comes in, they're banging on the bed, then they have standing sex. After, the antagonist leaves, but tells him that he should hold his wife properly now. They both have sex, he manages to keep it up for three times in a row, but she never seems to cum like she did just moments before, she even says the antagonist feels better!
Last two night business trip. There's never any permission for cuckold. For the first time, when she returns, she's unable to speak clearly for a moment. Tsk tsk tsk.
She's not sure about the France trip though. On one hand, she's saved up more than enough to support a life of having a baby now, but on the other hand, that amount doubles if she goes.
Some days later she says it would be too bothersome to not go now, for the company. Even the antagonist told her superiors that she wants to go. Sinister!
Even so, she still says she could call it off, and you get a choice.
IF SHE GOES:
Week one passes, week two passes, week three passes. MC has spoken to her a few times, but he's feeling lonely, and calls her. They say they love each other, and well, the story ends... What? Being so conflicted, i checked her perspective that unlocks for this scene. Turns out that phone call also happened to be right after the first time she finally gave in during the trip, even after saying she wouldn't have any more affairs to the antagonist. Turns out during that phone call, they were having sex, but you couldn't tell, because he didn't start moving or anything. Its also the first time you get internal ejaculation, or any visible ejaculation for that matter... She says to her self that she looks forward to holding the antagonist every day for the remainder of the trip. Good scene, but short.
IF SHE DOESN'T:
There's a work party coming up, think it was a farewell one for her. She doesn't come home that night, kind of intense for the MC, and again, if you didn't pick the other route, it's the first time there's an internal ejaculation too. This scene is considerably longer than the france trip due to some foreplay.
Final thoughts:
Well... It was great, but kinda didn't satisfy me with either end. She says that after both routes that she doesn't plan on cheating when she gets home from france/after the party. But can you really believe that? She's hollering KIMOGEEEEEE.
Also, i didn't mention, but at the beginning she's telling the antagonist to stop smoking. Like not in a mean way, but in a friendly you should quit kind of way. I thought to myself, wouldn't it be great if she actually picked up that habbit? Like shit. This would be different, like he changed her, but not just her sexual appatite, but her VALUES. Guess what! She does start smoking! Hooray Hooray Hooray! BUT WAIT, she never smokes in front of her husband and he never finds out... WTF?
I think there's enough room for part two, but unlike Marina, I think it would have to be full NTR, no reporting, after all, she already cheated without MC's knowledge, twice.
It really got me thinking, as i spoke about above, about ASMR and bi-neural audio in visual novels. I just think there's so much potential to turn something into an amazing thing with ASMR - honestly, it's a real shame i've never seen a single visual novel with it yet.
Alright, let's start with pro's and con's.
Pro:
- Protagonist organised netorare, all three of them are in on it.
- She picks up his smoking habit (refer to final thoughts)
- The idea of an overseas trip to finish things off was a total turn on, but there's a half of this that is a con too.
- Very enjoyable reporting.
Con:
- MC never see's his wife smoking... why? Such a big thing to play with here
- There's only two scenes with internal ejaculation, the two last scenes, each being on a separate route. Why? To me that's the best part. It's not even acknowledged in the france scene. Like really? at least say "put it inside".
- The condom's were never drawn. Again, i haven't properly played through her side yet. I have his side though, i read every line. I mean, it makes the sound like he's cumming, but there's no visual. So i can only assume he's wearing a condom. I don't get it though. She even teases the
- MC about not wearing one during a report - she does say she's lying, but it's just disappointing.
- Heroine has a chirpier voice. Kind of like a sister. Would have liked a little more mature sounding, but I grew used to it.
- The france trip should have had several scenes :(