Chopstick Tournament! [CLOSED]

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm dont really see that as being like light :x

 

[renano]

I consider him the male version of Biribiri.

 

[Decalcomania]

Well, Light's goal was to create the perfect world, right? Without any criminals and such. And Uninstall's way of saying that the chopsticks will kill thugs reminded me a bit of Light. In the way of getting rid of criminals.

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol male biribiri xD I wonder how he would feel about that~

Hmm well i guess :x But its all sorta a matter of personal opinion is it not? One person could be horrible or good in the eyes of different people~

 

[renano]

Well, Light's goal was to create the perfect world, right? Without any criminals and such. And Uninstall's way of saying that the chopsticks will kill thugs reminded me a bit of Light. In the way of getting rid of criminals.

Hmm... your explanation has provided some sense to what you claim. I approve!

 

[Uninstall]

Aight, I'm gonna go to bed now, peace yall ZZzz…(。-ω-)｡｡ooO((sweet dreams for all))

 

[Decalcomania]

And no reaction from the one getting talked about most o -o

 

[Uninstall]

Hahaha yeah yeah I will, tomorrow~
Consider it more like...
It will remind you of the ending to School Days, all of Kara no Shoujo, Elfen Lied, and SAW, or whatever. hehe

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol did he even notice? xD
Oh guess he did~

 

[Decalcomania]

The ending of School Days ruined the WHOLE anime for me.

 

[Uninstall]

Lol I found it quite amusing, it's like the animators just decided "you know what, screw it; I'm tired of this ****" and just came up with that ending. Anyways, goodnight FORREAL ZZzz…(。-ω-)

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm i just didnt really like school days from when the guy went a little on the nuts side :x

 

[Decalcomania]

I felt hatred and anger towards Makoto when he started sleeping with every girl. He deserved what he got in the end.

 

[renano]

I felt hatred and anger towards Makoto when he started sleeping with every girl. He deserved what he got in the end.

Makoto should call it a blessing~ XD

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Yeah =.= poked with a sharp object~

 

[Decalcomania]

Makoto should call it a blessing~ XD

I dislike those kinds of males. Sleeping with many different women. In these types of situations, one woman is better than a harem.

 

[renano]

Sam and I discussed School Days slightly.

He mentioned how I commented that Makoto should deserve to die... but I reworded it to make it sound less sadistic, and used blessing instead.

 

[Decalcomania]

It does not make you sadistic if you think Makoto deserved to die, that was the objective for the crew and I think everyone else agreed that he deserved to die xD

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol hiding your sadistic nature~
Hmm but yeah he deserved it probably... or maybe some fate worse

 

[Decalcomania]

I do wonder how we went from talking about chopsticks to being sadistic...

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm me and renano had random chats on being sadistic too~

 

[renano]

We chat about almost anything... sadistically. XD

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Renano ojou sama is so abusive

 

[Shir0]

ok, since i was pushed into the position of judge by a certain spammer, i will post my opinion now...

let us begin with [MENTION=24034]Evac[/MENTION]. you said that you cant draw, but you found an alternative solution anyways. i like your 3d model.
out of the four entries your product description is the most "normal"/"realistic" (dont know how to word it :/)
you seem to have focused on marketing your product quasi-professional. closer to real product marketing i guess???
i especially liked the details of your chopsticks. in my opinion you gave the most details about your chopsticks themselves. to name some examples: "atomic-scale manipulation at low temperatures" (yeah, materials can be processed this
way), "carbon allotrope", "standard conditions for temperature and pressure" (you know your stuff xD)...
thats a big plus for me as a hopefully-future-engineer~
as with the others' chopsticks yours are sturdy as well and stuff. the caramel-gimmick was nice~
i like this feature xD

next will be [MENTION=8332]samyeung46[/MENTION]. lets begin with your description first. its as expected of you
you used all those cool characters in your "story" (gandalf, darth vader, B-RABBIT <3). it has gotten quite random and it
turned more into a relic or something rather than chopsticks xD
or OP magical chopsticks...yep thats it^^
there is not too much description of the chopsticks themselves, but its ok. i really like the randomness and all the changing of owners. and the vague, unknown features gives your product some attractiveness. it picks my interest~
now on to your sketch. it turned out quite good for a rough sketch (i can see that you study arts xD)
you went through the trouble of adding shadows (something i will never do )
you have drawn a piece of cloth, tangled around the chopsticks, which are crossed instead of simply lined up next to each
other. you also added fairies and a little bird. this gives your product, after reading your fantasy story, a ?dreamy?/"fantastic" image. all this makes it quite ?aesthetic? (can i use this word here i just wanted to use it~) i really like your work^^
i hope i will be able to see one of your completed works someday

lets go on with [MENTION=18465]renano[/MENTION] now. first off i gotta hand it down to you for using a tablet. i know how hard it is. and you did pretty well imo. the thing i like about your sketch is the girl (i like her face and haircut). but it would have been nicer
to put more emphasis on the chopsticks somehow (dont know how though)
the beginning of your description was not really necessary, since those facts are chopsticks obvious purpose. but describing that in an overly exaggerated fashion made it funny again. and i like that xD
"Due to its sturdy property one may expect these chopsticks to last for a very long time... and it does" totally made me laugh~
the cloud decoration seems pretty neat. and its feature to fight odor is good as well. the hidden weapon feature is awesome. hidden weapons are awesome. good job!
what i also liked about your description was your use of catch phrases "simplicity meets necessity", your 24/7 slave-hotline and the girl you get with the limited edition (as you said shes designed after you )

last but not least [MENTION=25364]Decalcomania[/MENTION]. yours was closer to evacs than the other two. lets begin with your sketch. DRAWCEPTION XD...this was a nice idea. i liked it. your chopsticks are also nicely decorated with the flowers and the kanji. plus for adding shadows as well~
now to your description. i liked that you structured it this way. the emphasis on "finest" at the beginning made me laugh as well as the exaggerated amount of guardians, mr classified and the absurd course of action xD
i especially liked the irony of dying by eating chopsticks.

the decision is too hard and i dont really want to choose one, so i guess i will think a bit longer about it and leave this at it is for now...will add decision later maybe~

edit: too lazy to correct spelling mistakes and tenses...bear with me please

 

[Decalcomania]

Thank you Shiki for the honest judgement that you have spent an awful lot of time on. I applaud you for taking your time to review my drawing. Thank you.