Hmm probably have them up tmr sometime... too lazy and tired today xD
Gahh whatever i procrastinated enough... Should honor the time that the contestants gave to join the contest with some time of my own~ Hmm scores... Do i have to use those? I feel actually giving scores to someone's piece may influence voters more than just giving my comments which would allow them to agree or disagree and think for themselves~ And onwards~
First off~ Thank you all for putting your time and effort into this little contest :3 You all make up an important part of all this and i hope you will take notice of our future contests too~
[MENTION=24179]IwantPedobearToo[/MENTION]
Hmm interesting entry. We can see great improvement from the first entry to the second. The chopsticks no longer look like antennas and there is more substance to the creation. The human half seems to have a vague resemblance to bison is street fighter due to the cap. I would say that the squid could have been larger and chopstick couldve stopped floating around.
[MENTION=18465]renano[/MENTION] ojou sama
There is an obviously large amount of effort put into this entry. That poem took quite a while to read and certain parts made my word stumble but nonetheless i read on for poems are written to be read out loud.
Gahh got me into some odd poetic state... Anyhow the ending was somewhat more unexpected and made me wonder quite a bit. Now on to the piece. Buttersnake is quite the peculiar name though i suppose it fits. There is quite a large amount of detail and everything gives some sense of motion. The chopsticks seem somewhat randomly added to it though i think you gave a story why they were there at some point.
[MENTION=10496]Kuki[/MENTION]
Hmm expecting that certain monkey to make the chopsticks extend and grow larger so he could smack people with it though it seems that he is only going to toss them through people. He has quite the glare which im sure would help with intimidating opponents. You seem to have gone for a more realistic approach which i would count as one of the more difficult methods and have the proportions placed decently.
[MENTION=26209]kami-onii-chan[/MENTION]
Still quite curious what "that" is though it doesnt seem like i will get an answer... for now... The chopsticks seem in a somewhat more normal setting here though i do wonder how you got it from him to take that picture (considering how he seems to be holding it even in his sleep). The picture gives a sense of peace despite how his past was and the ominous future that was hinted at. I suppose this is like a little moment of peace during war times.
[MENTION=29913]Mato[/MENTION]
Hmm maybe try taking it at another angle and focusing? Somewhat different lighting may also help bring out the color of the piece as everything is somewhat blue. The chopsticks seem to have some designs on them but the image is somewhat blurry so i cant tell what. It could use improvements but isnt as bad as you say it is.
[MENTION=30548]nexus[/MENTION]
Kitsunemimi with ramen i assume? The proportions could use some work as the head seems to be as big as the body. Although that could be forgiven if there was certain circumstances that i dont see. Also seems like you forgot to color the eyes unless you intended to leave everything in the glasses white. If i view it as a somewhat more abstract piece then ill say that i like the colors chosen. Theyre quite bright creates a happy mood despite the confusion on his face. Btw whats tuda mean?
[MENTION=26445]Ralium[/MENTION]
Quite the story you got there. I almost fell asleep at bla (actually im just tired). Hmm so is he a vampire of sorts? Seems to maybe be part golem of a lava type too. Also needs a larger shirt so he could fit more names of it.
[MENTION=30649]DL Zandorf Rahamasch[/MENTION]
Interesting story which i guess may have some foothold in reality besides the obviously false parts. An alternate view of the world as it is. The batman is quite well drawn although it isnt your entry or at least not your main entry. The human swordfish is quite original as an entry and decently well drawn. The proportions of the head bother me somewhat although im unsure if you intended for the head to be somewhat wide.
[MENTION=27188]SainTPrimE[/MENTION]
The bit of reality that you sneaked into the story was nice. The picture is also drawn well with random bits of detail around the page. The ramen looks quite appealing to hungry me and it seems like a homely place though at the same time not since i think it is a cafeteria or something along those lines.
[MENTION=29458]cyberhood[/MENTION]
The story was confusing at parts though i understood to some extent. It looks like quite a normal everyday scene for certain people. Sleeping or at least lying by the laptop with ramen. The head is a little small compared to the size of the rest of the body.
Anyhow these are just random little thoughts i had while examining each piece... there was also some distractions/annoyances in the form people and other stuff while i was typing this up... though i gave myself some time to get my mood somewhat more neutral before continuing to judge so ill hope it didnt actually effect too much~ Also quite sleepy since its 3:30 or so atm...
