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[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm not bad

 

[Slayn312]

It look good.....

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

/me searches for stuff to complain about ;p

 

[thecoins]

[MENTION=10379]Neko[/MENTION]; yes! that's perfect. when all 5 images have finished, could you zip and email it to me? wait first for other's comment though

 

[Neko]

samyeung46 searches for stuff to complain about ;p

Oh come on ;p

[MENTION=29831]thecoins[/MENTION]; roger ~

 

[thecoins]

[MENTION=10379]Neko[/MENTION]; yes! that's perfect. when all 5 images have finished, could you zip and email it to me? wait first for other's comment though

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm maybe make the words for the options smaller cuz atm they seem larger than the stuff before them~

 

[Neko]

Hmm maybe make the words for the options smaller cuz atm they seem larger than the stuff before them~

Hmm.. the dark fonts? okay.. i'll change it imd.

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm and thats the major thing i would tweak~ Other stuff... is decent ;p I would be hard to satisfied completely but theyre good enough~

 

[Slayn312]

Lol.... Sammy will pick it to the bone if he was project leader.....

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm i have never created a piece i was completely satisfied with ;p There will always be stuff i can change~

 

[thecoins]

hmm perfectionist

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm but its getting me an A+ in art class so it isnt too bad... just that the time i put into it... @_@

 

[Neko]

Lol.. Here you go.. smaller than before + add some feathers bg.
what do you like most between these two.. if you know the difference

Spoiler:

 

[~SnowAngel~]

[MENTION=25364]Decalcomania[/MENTION]; I could definitely use some help with dialog~ I can think of what the characters might say during thoughts/narration, but dialog I'm not so sure about x_x
we'll see where it ends up soon~ after story outline comes scene progression planning XD then will the scenes with words~

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm transparency Mostly a matter of preference but theyre both fine to meh~

 

[Neko]

Okay.. just now it's finished.. lol
Time to hover n stuff.

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol ok xD Hmm feathers were nice~ Thought the background needed something more myself~ But i was thinking of something else which would probably be complicated xD

 

[Kasumi]

Lol hmm care to be a beta tester or something kasumi?~ Though you said youre busy or something didnt you?

I wouldn't mind! Lol horrible at priorities, that's me. xD I just have to play the game and look out for any bugs and whatnot, yes?

 

[thecoins]

basically yes......

edit: male MC

 

[Decalcomania]

His shoulders look a bit... weird.

 

[thecoins]

hmmm it needs to be wider right?

 

[~SnowAngel~]

he looks gorgeous~<3

 

[nanashi1]

Hey guys/girls: [MENTION=10379]Neko[/MENTION]; [MENTION=17020]~SnowAngel~[/MENTION]; [MENTION=25364]Decalcomania[/MENTION]; [MENTION=29913]Mato[/MENTION]; [MENTION=8332]samyeung46[/MENTION]; [MENTION=23111]Slayn312[/MENTION]; [MENTION=29831]thecoins[/MENTION];...etc.

Spoiler: [B

Take a break...!!![/B]]

Take what you want...~

 

[thecoins]

hmmm why [MENTION=29193]nanashi1[/MENTION]; ?