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Hmm gone for a while... well i probably wont be too crazy either cuz finals are also coming around and the teachers are giving quite a bit of work...

For the car scenes... you dont actually have to be driving? Could just be sitting in the car and its still basically the same xD We were going to change the view out the window right? So maybe also have an image where youre parked by/in front of a white wall and it might be easier for them to cut out the window and put an image there~ Ill probably sneak random pictures too xD If i can get myself to remember to x.x Do we need view from different seats in the car? Hmm i think itll probably be better to just use one car for this so i probably wont be taking any out of my car unless were planning on having several cars?
 
i'm going to emphasize that the car/campus pics are for reference and inspiration~ by no means am i asking that people use everything in it. x-x It's mostly to give an idea of what kind of scenery to present. ummmmm I'm also wondering how much it should be used. I mean, it could bore the reader if it's too often. I think it's useful for lots of thought-narration from the character. Depending on the story, we might even have to not use it x-x. (hmmmmmm nvm there's a way around that XD I just remembered x-x)
 
i'm likely to over do that sooooooo i'd need people to remind me not to do that :P it might be something the guy would do alot for sure~ re-thinking the characters' roles would be best. (soooo random talk about it in the forum helps :P)
 
Well we could make it so their actions show what theyre thinking... but i dont think people would really mind a lot of thought narration?
 
Hmm it mostly for the quiet characters? Though we need to keep in mind that the other characters will not be able to read thoughts ;p
 
solo = thoughts to oneself~ sooo in a case of writing a diary, or the guy thinking to himself. We could also use the car scenes, but maybe not as much as the writing.

I'd love to see plenty of talking too~ more characters would help guide that. (classmates, teachers, etc??)
the subs and mini would need some better ideas tho. (more about that later in the forum)

going to sleep and do more schoooollllllllll hope/pray I can enough done over the weekend. (I rarely get to x-x)

slayn you're a brilliant person :P
 
Hmm... diary... well those would mostly be thoughts on the day and stuff... not the immediate thoughts xD

Will the two MC sort of be somewhat quiet at times?
 
a proper music score helps the reader immerse themselves into the story.
i.e. using the lighthearted and slow music can create a feeling of calmness and serenity while a slow ominous music can create a sense of dread and fear in the reader
 

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