Hair clips are usually a similar color to a person's hair so it doesn't stand out as much.
I think it needs something~ not sure yet >.< maybe after I can add more to stuff.
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The main story outline isn't finished yet~ it still needs some polishing and stuff. We also need to polish character bio.
Ummmmmm there will be a thread for when we start talking about the title~ for now, the outlines and bio etc should be completed first. Character art stuff would help too~ if you think something can be improved, keep working at it~ don't settle for less if you can :P
Even if we did give it a title, we should not consider it the complete title till everything else is done~ (remember when I said everything needs about the same effort? XD) What we'd think of it soon might not be the same as reading it. Having a title too long might cause people to shape things according to the title. sooooo random ideas are fine if you can't wait? the title would be what draws interested people, and a description would be what makes them read it. :P
Parents usually don't name a baby til after it's born soooo think of the vn as the same way? XD We can think of names here and there, but we won't know for sure til later~
oohh ummmmmmmm adding character idea to the forum~ (don't want to spoil XD)