Chopstick Hairpiece Contest [CLOSED]

[Hideki]

*tries to focus as his heart just got pierced* eheheh....

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm actually spots of lightness and darkness are focal points~ The hand is a focal point because it is in the center of the page and it is a "break" in the hair~ The lamp is a focus because it is light and the designs~ The dragon is the last focus because it is the next "different" seeming object in the piece after the other two~

 

[renano]

My heart beats for Hideki~

Areas with a degree of light or dark are focal points depending on the value and angle.

Although, what is drawn can catch a person's attention even without the use of lighting.

 

[SainTPrimE]

Ohohoho.... Gwee made his review already... Yatta...

Arigato Gwee-san...

 

[Hideki]

im back... ~~

 

[renano]

Welcome back Hideki~

Neko is still... MIA for now~

 

[Hideki]

thank you renano..... *hides face*

 

[renano]

You're still adorable as always Hideki~

Still, bye for now.

I'll be attending a BBQ Party. ^^

Have a lovely day~

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Have fun at the bbq :3 Dont hurt too much people~

 

[renano]

Lol~

Thanks Sam.

I didn't hurt anyone. The most I did was spill food and drinks on them... accidentally maybe. ^^

It was at my older cousin's house. I find his friends... annoying.

Still, somewhat fun.

 

[AhGwee]

Hmm, I see Sam. That is indeed another way of looking at it~
Thanks. It is a pleasure to hear from your opinion =]

Sorry it took so long SainT. It should have been done on the second day after the contest started. And no problem. What are your opinions on it? I would like to hear from you if possible =]

Hmm, a BBQ. It has been almost over a year since I had one~

Okay, time over. Talk to you again =]

 

[Shir0]

voted now~

 

[Neko]

Sorry for late evaluation, i got nothing to do with my job, kinda busy this month..
But at least i must finish this evaluation :3
Here it is (sorry for bad engls.)

Spoiler: Neko's Evaluation

1.

Spoiler: kami-onii-chan

(+) Points=

- The music is really suit with your work,it gives some sexy sensations instead.

- Your figure drawing skill is good enough, blur effect in sensitive area is a great point,
it made not too pointed on her nipples.

- She's covering "those" with her finger, very good idea.. she looks so sexy with it.

- Her eyes looked at our perspective, it release some sensual desires like she want to say "How is it?"XD

- Her body are quite proportional, more plus point.. (note: i'm not pervert)

- The chopstick hairpiece on her lips and fingers looks like a "kunai" (ninja weapon)

(-) Points=

- About chopstick hairpiece, like re-chan and gwee said..
it would be great if it drawn more darker so it can be focused than the figure.
The figure itself as feature to support the chopstick hairpiece viewpoint.

- No description XD

- Her eyes are kinda lil` gloomy, brighter on it's margin will do.

- Maybe you can add some background like onsen or sakura tree to support it value.

Yep that's all for kami-onii-chan.
Thanks for participate. Good work :3

2.

Spoiler: Vietx2k

(+) Points=

- Very enjoyable, nice music you had, it brings mood back :3

- It's a creative idea to made "marshmallow/Mashimaro XD" as a figure.
The only one 3D figure on this contest. Good job viet.

- Using Mashimaro as second main person viewpoint to describe.

- Interesting description, full color design, anyone who saw will fascinated on it.

- Using chopstick/OMEGA STRIKE POKING PICKER UPPER (Osppu) as a weapon and tools for eat XD
impressive idea.

- The way you describes it is very friendly with those awesome pictures.

(-) Points=

- Too many object to describe, but it still great.

- Messy viewpoint, it should be chopstick hairpiece :3

That's all, Vietx2k
thanks for participate, good work.

3.

Spoiler: samyeung46

(+) Points=

- Great music, means someone/something precious that you had, also it really suited with your story.

- Nice design, both illustration and shading.

- I know what you mean of "glowiness", 3 shadows on different directions below the lantern..
You put a good effort on it. Your shading techniques are great.

- Shiina as figure with yukata, really epic.

- I can see you adds her katana and dagger over the pillow. plus point :3

- The chopstick description is very detail, focused on chopstick hairpiece.

- Your plot story line is good enough. Adding some essays on true story and changes it into different one.

(-) Points=

- Only one i can say, it would be great if you add more colors to your work :3

That's all for samyeung46
Thanks for participate, great work.

4.

Spoiler: SainTPrimE

(+) Points=

- The music sounds comfortable :3

- The colors combination was good, orange as base, little green and dark/black background suited well.

- The description of chopstick hairpiece's design and decoration looks really detail.(zoom mode activated XD)

(-) Points=

- Same as re-chan n gwee, what're you focuses about? the chopstick or the decoration? XD

- Maybe you needs more line depiction techniques :3

That's all for SainTPrime
Thanks for participate, good work :)

 

[AhGwee]

Thanks for your evaluation Neko. Might have been better had you included mentions for the people that you've evaluated and for Rennie so that it would be easier to search for too. =]
Though by writing this, I hope for the thread to get bumped so they would notice too. *ehehe*

And with that, all the evaluations have been completed~

[MENTION=18465]renano[/MENTION], [MENTION=8332]samyeung46[/MENTION], [MENTION=27188]SainTPrimE[/MENTION], [MENTION=26209]kami-onii-chan[/MENTION], [MENTION=10870]Vietx2k[/MENTION]

Thanks for your vote Shiki :3

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Wee now to go and read more random stuff I haz my ramen~

Food and drinks... do they stain? :3 Hehehe~

 

[AhGwee]

Depends on the food and depends on the drink =]

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Nuu there isnt enough negatives to poke at Well no rebuttal for this judge then Well colors... actually i didnt have any color pencils and it might look somewhat worse if i had... cuz when i color (or draw) everything usually turn out really light and thats about the only effect i can usually get... The darkest on the picture is about the darkest i ever get with anything... cant make "epic" stuff with my usual scale unless i force myself...

 

[AhGwee]

Small sneak in once more xD

If I remember your work did get wet from rainwater before did it not?

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol nah that was Saint~

 

[renano]

[MENTION=10379]Neko[/MENTION]

Thank you for your time.

We all appreciate your effort and admire your dedication.

It has been posted on the first page.

It was an enjoyable ride so far.

Please do rest and take care.

 

[AhGwee]

I see~

Anyway, it's about time I go sleep. Should have slept earlier so then I could wake up in a time zone more comfortable for you two =]

Enjoy the rest of the evening you two~

 

[renano]

Bye-bye AhGwee~

Much love for you.

/me casually gazes upon the 'magic' of rotation.

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Oh my~ Ojou sama is using the "magic" too~

Goodnight Gwee :3

 

[Neko]

Nuu there isnt enough negatives to poke at Well no rebuttal for this judge then Well colors... actually i didnt have any color pencils and it might look somewhat worse if i had... cuz when i color (or draw) everything usually turn out really light and thats about the only effect i can usually get... The darkest on the picture is about the darkest i ever get with anything... cant make "epic" stuff with my usual scale unless i force myself...

You should learn to use pencil colors then XD
Little pressure on your grip can make different colors (lighter/darker) on purpose :3

[MENTION=10379]Neko[/MENTION]

Thank you for your time.

We all appreciate your effort and admire your dedication.

It has been posted on the first page.

It was an enjoyable ride so far.

Please do rest and take care.

I'm the one who should say "thanks",
thanks for entrusted me to be a judge for this contest.
ありがとうございました
Arigatōgozaimashita

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol i know how but its just that if you watch me draw you will see that everything i do turns out light xD Unless i actually go and grab black... but even that isnt as dark as can be lol~

Judgy neko~ :3