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42682 Ohayo. I'm back and looks like I didn't oversleep...:goodtea:

The contradiction I talked about is the one with, the boy and the girl having a "situation like that" when they were young... And I never said that she learned it by being with her family... Also, it's not yours story alone anymore so get used to it ;P

And were waiting for their arrival with an ambush~
 
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42683 You could start your own story instead of forcing change in mine? :goodtea: And how is a situation like that a contradiction?~

The two dark lords glaring at the pair as the doors slammed against the wall and stopped~
 
42684 Anyways, I posted girls bs and how they met bs earlier than you, so I win... It's more fun writing together. Maybe you did write the first post of the story, but we came this far writing this story together so starting new one is waste...

Surprised expecting only one dark lord the pair prepared for a fierce battle. But then they noticed that it was just one dark lord standing beside a mirror... but~
 
42686 Earlier? Ive posting my story since at least 2k posts back ;p How did you ever manage to post earlier than me~ Btw do you know what bs even means? If you can sneak your story in as the girl describing her past and not contradict what was already put then go ahead :goodtea: Basically what i have on the girl is that she was the first person to find the boy when he escaped the abyss and her family took her in~ The girl was like an elderly sister to him and there was also other children who lived with them (the family sort of takes care of the village's children)~ The boy was secretly destroying the shadow creatures that went to that world and thought maybe he could live like a normal child but some villager saw him one day and then they chased him out for having powers over darkness (stupid irrational fears) The boy decided to leave and the girl followed~ She gained the powers over light during her travels with the boy~

From the mirror poured out smaller minions from the lord that had left...
 
42687 1.Bs is background story, I'm writer myself (kind of), so of course I will know that...
2.And at post №42657 you only wrote
42657 Hmm i have an idea for why the girl has light power but the boy...
so it's not strange to assume that you only have an idea, and have not written her bs yet. So when I wrote her story in post №42658 that would be the first post containing her bs meaning I posted her bs earlier then you. That's what I meant for my "posted earlier"
3.Anyways, after you explained the bs you thought up in details it does sound better, but still...

And while the demon lord before them was still glaring at them, the one in mirror was now laughing while sending more and more minions at the pair~
 
42688 Hmm i said that i was bsing it sooo... ;p I meant the not so innocent meaning~
and i pretty much posted that whole pile in one of the earlier posts already :goodtea: When i said i had an idea i was mostly talking about how she came to get her powers which i had not written much about~ I never said i didnt have a story for the girl~

The pair stayed in the tunnel and readied themselves while preparing to retreat if they should need to~
 
42689 Okay, you win. Ah well... so ends the story of boy and girl going on killing spree for the sake of vengeance...:sowwy:

But the door behind them was now sealed with black magic of the dark lord so the only choice was to fight for their lives.~
 
42691 X1st page here as well...
Was put in place by the demon lord. The boy swiftly tried to crush it with his chains but~
 
42692 Hmm you dont have to connect your sentences with mine xD Im sort of leaving them somewhat... more for sound that for structure~

The minions had already blocked the way~ The boy sought his chances through the mirror to the abyss~
 
42696 Okay...

By chance or not, the mirror of the abyss the boy created connected to the mirror of the demon lord~
 
42670...

The boy didn't miss this opportunity and immediately sent his chains flying at the reflection of the demon lord which was still laughing~
 

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