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Hellos shi~

Hmm the coloring is nice... but it looks like its stretched taller or something xD Seems a bit skinny? The head doesnt match the shoulder width now...
 
I don't think so... In this case seems the head-size with the rest of body this time good to synchronize, Coins...~
 
Hmm is it? well idk seems thin to meh... the shoulders seem fine but the head should probably be wider if you were following realistic proportions...
 
Perhaps the head about (max) - 10% shorter to make, but that is the maximum rating...~

Otherwise is it almost perfect
 
Hmm i didn't draw the whole body. probably that's why the anatomy is quite weird
 
Lol takes your time :goodtea: As long as im aware you know that theres actually something then im fine~

Goodnightys ushio~
 
instead of stabbing each other, why don't you too cheers ushio and help her improve the story? :3
 
if you have room to complain, you have room to help improve~

(i'll work on it very soon~ need to get a few things out of the way, maybe cook and then i'll focus more on it)
 

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