lol, stalking me, were you?
Well, to start with, how about you add some screenshots? It's a tutorial for graphics design, you see, a field where one image is more meaningful than a thousand words. Rather than having a post with only text, why not add some images to show your readers what magical things you can do by making graphics design?
That aside, there are some parts in the tutorial with which I disagree, such as your proposed way of rendering, but that's a matter of... preference, I suppose. Hehe.