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Hmm well we could sort of just go back to using the forum... shows to everyone that way...
 
I'm trying to change my coloring style a bit
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So much space between the eyes xD The nose isnt that big ;p

Hmm ok~ Do what you will~ The shading and stuff is decent~
 
Hmm yeah that might be~ Anime eyes are large cuz they need to be about the same width as normal eyes ;p Or so i think~
 
It doesn't really matter, [MENTION=29831]thecoins[/MENTION] ; The eyes could be a little closer together, but keep the size of it.
 
Hmm size could change depending how it looks after its move? Maybe draw in the nose to see~ Usually having all the basic parts first will make something look better~
 
[MENTION=29831]thecoins[/MENTION]; please don't make her wear something like x-x her size also needs to be smaller.. That's really close to C or D.

I like the colors! might be a little bright since it's hard to see the mouth :/
 
Can help with programming if there is a need. Know a bit about C++ What are you making it with, btw?... Also can throw a bit of ideas about story...
 
Hmm i think coins is just doing the programming himself... not sure... i think someone else offered to help with that too?
 
Hmm C++... maybe useful if i use cocos2d. but I'm using ren'py, because it's simpler. i don't need to make anything from basic. ren'py is made using python, which is not a very hard language.
 
[MENTION=29831]thecoins[/MENTION]; This is just a suggestion... if you use semi-realistic head proportion like in the last picture, perhaps you could wider her shoulder width to make it more balanced. Her finger/palm also looks more proportionate if you enlarge it a little (about 20-25%). In realistic/semi-realistic proportion, hand size is about the same as the face size (in length).
 
the basics are easy. but figuring how to add new features is quite challenging
 
Hmm then how do you do the stuff that there isnt tutorials for? xD Write the code yourself?
 

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