[LPW#36] Stay Classy My Friends

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm yes the text is somewhat invisiible cuz the siggy is somewhat light and the words are similarly light...

The placement of the girls... doesnt seem to work very well... all the weight is on the right so that creates an imbalance...

The ripples seems quite nice... but the two in the back are kind of covered a bit too much... needs somewhat more emphasis on them...

 

[renano]

renano = short, blunt statements & coffee roll

Sam = slightly more detailed & no coffee roll

 

[nawi]

hellos minna,,,,,rena-jou-san, selva, sam.....hmm...new siggy there selva...

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol well what else is there to poke at xD We noticed the same things basically~ And what does coffee roll have to do with anything o.o

 

[renano]

I had coffee roll, but I ate it all. D:

That's what I get for drawing without eating much. >.<

We're even now. You have no coffee roll. I have no coffee roll.

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Ok... no coffee roll... well should go eat more if you need it...

Hellos nawi~

 

[nawi]

hellos sammy..../me hides back in the shadow to continue downloading...

 

[renano]

I'll be a waverer if I ponder whether to eat or not. >.<

Maybe a light snack will suffice for the time being.

Snow cones it is!

/me gives Sam and nawi snow cones

 

[Selvaria Bles]

hey nawi

thanks for all the feedback

will consider it the next time :p

XD

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm use our advice as you would~

Light snack~ Is it almost dinner?

/me accepts snow cones~

 

[Selvaria Bles]

I see your point

but I made it light on purpose

:D

also I kept it high on purpose to make it blend :p

 

[renano]

@ Sel

Go with Sam since I didn't give a thorough critique.

The right, vertical text over her face bothers me the most though.

/me gives Sel a snow cone

@ Sam

Also, it's 3:30 A.M. now for me.

What I eat wouldn't matter much because my mother says my stomach is like a cow. xD

I'll just eat whatever I want. jk

 

[Selvaria Bles]

/me accept snow cone and starts message back lightly and softly...

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol so youre going to eat something anyway or just try and last till whenever?

My critique could be better but yeah i noticed the text over the face too >.< I just didnt say anything cuz you already mentioned to move the text...

 

[renano]

@ Sel

/me hugs Sel and massages him as well

@ Sam

I'll eat a snow cone.

Once it's around 5 or 7, I'll consider a better meal. :D

I was just thinking what would make Sel's sig look more pleasing if he chose to stick with what he has. Taking out that text would improve the most... for my eyes. xD

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Snow cones arent that great of a snack xD

Hmm 5 or 7? So basically breakfast?

Yeah... the text is the most bothersome atm...

 

[renano]

I was thinking of putting soy sauce on the snow cone, but decided against it.

Need it for other worthy foods. ^^

Also, it's a great snack! For me that is. >.<


Breakfast it is! I'm getting tired of lobster though.


Sig making is enjoyable... Sel! Take out or change that text right now! jk

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm ok then... theyre just not too filling for me... tastes good though...

Soy sauce o.o salty snow cone...

Lobster? Did your parents just buy a lot?

 

[renano]

Since it'll be breakfast sometime soon, snow cones will do. I don't want to stuff myself... yet. xD

It would be salty and since soy sauce is strong, I should consider how much I will add.

You should try it first. Soy sauce on snow cones. /me gives Sam one

My parents buy two lobsters every two-three days.

We've been buying lobster since June. D:

 

[Selvaria Bles]

fixed it :p

[MENTION=18465]renano[/MENTION]


/me kisses renano for message..

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol yeah... soy sauce is quite strong... just a little bit is enough for me... /me tries cone...

Is it cheap or something?... the lobster is somewhat cheap in LA...

 

[Selvaria Bles]

what is cheap :p

lobster is damn expensive......

 

[renano]

/me kisses Sel's cheek and lets him lie on her lap

Lol. Your sig is looking good... for now.


/me casually watches in anticipation at Sam eating the 'SSSC'. (Soy sauce snow cone) OwO

It is cheap, for now.

Once autumn hits, they'll raise the prices.

Eh... they still buy it whether it's cheap or not. D:

 

[Selvaria Bles]

for now XD

come on, I am keeping this for a while :p

SAO is too good :p

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

/me faints

Hmm so they just dont really bother with prices... was a dollar a pound in LA at a certain place but only if there was x amount of people. :/

The siggy... want complaints? ;p